You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:-Explain your situation-Describe your problems-Tell him/her when you think you can start

Essay topics:

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.

Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:

-Explain your situation

-Describe your problems

-Tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter on my delay in joining your organisation. I am expected to report as a senior developer role at Wipro office next monday but unfortunately, I will not be able to join as expected.

Lately last week, I met with an accident and had a fracture in my leg, I was advised by the doctor to have bed rest for a week hence I did not attend the office. As I had not completed the transition for my activities, I had to extend my probationary period in the current job. Though I am still not able to walk properly, managing to go to office and complete the knowledge transfer at the earliest.

With the current situation, I believe that I will be able to join your organisation with a delay of one week. I am sorry that I had to postpone but I think you should be able to understand the situation and do the needful for postponing my joining formalities accordingly.

Thanking you

yours sincerely,

Anil Reddy

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter on my delay in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, so, still, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84567214351 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9668956486 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190744325567 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920642638148 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808536546154 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105311085718 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544965765712 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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