Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
Most of the ancient cities around the globe are passing through a major process of upgradation. There are some positives and negatives of this trend which I will discuss in coming crumb of my writing.
To begin with, there are manifold advantages of modernization. Firstly, when modernization takes place, new facilities are available such as in transportation system, new vehicles are introduce. Also, the existing roads become wide and some new paths are built to make a city crowd free. More rail tracks are developed to make transportation easy. Secondly, sewage system is introduce to make place clean from dirty water . This is very helpful because it collects the unwanted water from the roads and various places and make the place free from foul. In addition, underground transportation system make the life convenient and save our precious time. Therefore, upgradation serves for us in various ways.
On the flip side, there are some disadvantages of this trend. City becomes expensive after this and the cost of materials touch the top so that it becomes difficult for a middle class family to survive in such a costly place. Moreover, although this is a good to some extent, it damages the historical monuments. Sometimes it put scratches on them. For an illustration, in 2009, in France, when upgradation took place, it destroyed the temple which had historical important. In addition, it diminish the traditional way of living and it ends our culture and heritage. People adopt Western things so that our culture and language reach to the end point.
In conclusion, Even though, it has advantages, we do not forget about disadvantages. Modernization should takes place in a limit and during upgradation, we have to think about the historical buildings and do something to preserve them.
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Suggestion: introduced
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14965986395 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93576936098 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9582124411 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6842105263 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100137744122 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319312603884 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657675068892 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674762722447 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591297020388 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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