In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
There is no doubt that today is the age of robot when every technology’s sector is getting forward including agricultural. However, thus headway is make food price higher so people cannot afford to buy and lack of food is everywhere. this essay will examine the cause of this disturbing and propose a feasible solution.
Starting by production cost involved in agriculture is the main reason for high-priced. this is due to insufficiency of financial support from government and also high-priced for agricultural machineries. Moreover, the tools used for sowing and harvesting are expensive for farm hand. In fact, they directly raise the food price. As a result, low-income consumers cannot bear to purchase enough food and they suffer for starve.
In the other hand, government should play a role in this case. The government as a regulator should assist the agriculturalist financially to control the food price. For instance, the government could provide low-interest loan to the farming community. Not only offer the loans but also subsidies land management and utilities. this will encourage farmers to supply quality food in bulk to the market. Furthermore, the low-price and high-quality scheme can be reach by middle low citizen.
In a nutshell, a thousand people still go starving because they can pay for the overpriced food. it is the responsibility of government to watch and control the scheme as mentioned above to ensure all sections of society can have enough eat. As long as the food remains expensive, it cannot say that there is no advancement in agriculture will eradicate hunger in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24045801527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06125192195 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0854594699 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129241363192 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419750406847 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495710242496 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820342250018 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361483775954 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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