The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road.
In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain the condition of the road
• and suggest what they should do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the negligence in the task of repairing the road by the municipal authority workers. I am very dissatisfied with the inefficiency of your workers.
My name is Prabhpreet Kaur working as a Senior Manager in HSBC Bank and a resident of New Friends Colony residing in House Number 27 for the past 13 years.
Last month, due to heavy rains the road in the front of my house was damaged. There is a big pothole in the middle of the road. During rains the pothole is filled with water making it difficult for driving cars. Moreover, many children have got hurt while riding bicycle and also water logging becomes the home of mosquitoes and other insects thus causing many diseases
I would suggest you to take necessary and immediate actions and send a team of efficient workers for repairing the damaged road as soon as possible so that not only there are no casualties but also people do not suffer from any health issues.
I hope you will take prompt action
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other insects thus causing many diseases I would suggest you to take necessary an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. I hope you will take prompt action Looking forward to hearing from you soon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796875 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44842636538 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677083333333 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.920300305 44.8134815571 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212751045049 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859258137571 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838083571428 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760545331041 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913455986622 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.