Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you want to work there
– What skills and work experience you have
– Inquire about the benefits (salary and hours).
Dear Marry,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you in good health. are you enjoying your job as a network engineer in canada?
I wanted to ask you, to check job opportunities for me in canada, as you are already working there. so, you must have better connections and links. I am very keen to work abroad to boost my resume, to gain experience of working in an international and diverse environment. so that I could become a full rounded employee and grow professionally and personally. Further to this, it will help me in increasing my professional network.
As you know I am CCNA and CCNP certified and working in Omantel as a network engineer for four years. I have good hands-on knowledge of cisco Routers, cisco switches, and cisco real network operating system(ISO.)
having all the technical expertise. I want to land a well-paid job, which could offer me incentives Viz. health insurance, accommodation, free ticket to my country and free training programs.
Looking forward to hearing your response.
Warm Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marry, How are you? Hope this letter finds you ...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...e this letter finds you in good health. are you enjoying your job as a network engi...
^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...nada, as you are already working there. so, you must have better connections and l...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... international and diverse environment. so that I could become a full rounded empl...
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Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...and grow professionally and personally. Further to this, it will help me in increasing ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...sco real network operating systemISO. having all the technical expertise. I want to ...
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Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my country and free training programs. Looking forward to hearing your response...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9304933212 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.802445748 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9285714286 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264417738535 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082013893788 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788173592329 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136354019637 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840649912868 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.