The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph given exhibits the amount of new residential built in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west during the time period from 2006 to 2012. Overall, the number of single family homes in south of united states swelled, while the quantity of homes which was built in midweast surged.

Looking at the line representing construction of homes in south of united states ,there began much higher than midwest homes ,with 900,000 homes in 2006. This number plunged considerably to almost 300,000 homes in the following four years. Howevere, Before swelling by leaps and bounds to almost 300,000 homes in 2012, there was a noticeable slump in the amount of midweast homes to almost 300,000 homes in 2010.

As to the mideast region, it can be seen that there began at around 200,000 homes in 2006, then there was a hefty staggering under 100,000 homes, which was ht rock bottom during the period presented. Finally, the number of homes in west region and noth experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of new residential built in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west duri...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , midwest
...ential built in four regions , northeast,midwest, south, and west during the time period...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ction of homes in south of united states ,there began much higher than midwest hom...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere began much higher than midwest homes ,with 900,000 homes in 2006. This number ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to almost 300,000 homes in 2010. As to the mideast region, it can be seen...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of homes in west region and noth experienced a markedly fall to nearly 9...
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Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('markedly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fall') instead of another adjective.
...es in west region and noth experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... region and noth experienced a markedly fall to nearly 90,000 homes in 2012.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, so, then, well, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99425287356 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52358022319 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8454312878 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203023814928 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110902620469 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473759664395 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148964564608 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405221315672 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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