Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Using sugar affects bodies negitively. Somebody belives that the state shold take some steps to manage this broblem, while others think that everyone should be responsiable toward his/ her health, in particlar; in this issue. This essay supports the former opinion, but both views will be discussed as follows.
There is a point of view argues that the govermental solutions will be effective to stop sugar over using because they always rely on authorties in everythings. People who live in rich countries depend on the government which has big wellfare as a result of the varity of income resources which enable it face different types of dangers. For instance, the GCC countries spended 2.000.000 dollar till present time to support the "anti-sugar programme " that has been launched since 10 years, in contrast; other governments of devloping countries in middle east have not contributed in any healthy programme since 1988.
This article biases toward that opinion which belives in self –responsipilty toward healthy issues including the adding sugar in drinks and food. The reason for this is that the person is the only one who gains the rewards of taking care of himself/herself. For example, the magazine of "healthy food" ,in 2018; puplished a study which revealed that people who follow healthy diet live longer than those who do not do the same.
In conclution, the writer stated that the anti-sugar issue should be personal duty, on other hand, the writer has no forgtten the opposite view which thinks that the government is the responsiple about this issue. It is thought that the awareness about effects of sugar will be rised in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21978021978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7397847214 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4443756117 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228518486439 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083533058363 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042485506501 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13941387467 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503207553192 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.