Write a letter to your friend inviting on family activity.
In the letter, you should:
what the activity is
what you planed
why it is important that your friend should come
Dear Annie,
I hope you are doing well. It’s been long time since we met. Moreover, I have been busy during last days with my mid-term examinations.
As you know, our current residence is very far from my school. Therefore, my father had been searching for a new home close to my school, for a long time. This is to inform you that my father has recently purchased a new penthouse in the Dream-tech society. We will move into our new home next week. So, I would like to invite you for the house warming party to be scheduled on 7th may 2018.The party will start at 6 p.m. We are inviting all our relatives and friends.
It is a spacious 4 BHK apartment. The main attraction of this apartment is its roof garden and spacious balconies. So, we cannot only host small parties there but can also play and relax in the garden. Additionally, it would take only 10 minutes to reach school.
Since you are my childhood friend, you need to be present in the party. We will enjoy together. It would be fun to have you here.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Love
Rosy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...g party to be scheduled on 7th may 2018.The party will start at 6 p.m. We are invit...
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Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...nd friends. It is a spacious 4 BHK apartment. The main attraction of this apartment ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57360406091 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42387780043 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5525644162 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.3125 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112698866406 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376278004713 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524795886592 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742620077835 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552262074438 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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