Write A Letter To Your Friend About Your City. Please, Check My Letter?
Dear Julia,
Hello! How are you? I couldn't write to you for a long time, because I was very busy studies. I want to tell you about my life in the city.
I live in Ukraine, Odessa. Odessa is a really exciting city with million beautiful people. People are friendly and honest with other because they always spend a lot of time together. Example, most they attend restaurants with their friends and make picnics, walk in the park. Streets in the city are very big and clean because here people throw rubbish in a bin and care about nature.
I like living here now. Odessa has different wonderful places. My favourite place is Ukrainian theatre because there come talented actors. In my opinion, the weather in Odessa is varied, so people are always interested what it is going to be tomorrow. But I like when it is sunny. Buildings here are beautiful, although I don't like all of them. The biggest and greatest building is City Center. There you can go shopping and spend good time with your family and friends.
Well, it is all my news for now. I am waiting for you with your family to visit me with ineptitude as soon as you can. I will be happy to see and hear you.
Lots of love,
Alina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
Dear Julia, Hello! How are you? I couldnt write to you for a long time, because I...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ell you about my life in the city. I live in Ukraine, Odessa. Odessa is a re...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
.... Odessa is a really exciting city with million beautiful people. People are friendly a...
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Line 13, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uildings here are beautiful, although I dont like all of them. The biggest and great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54090909091 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24184011639 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1109853972 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.95 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12209879204 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312389928221 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425114977105 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758216004994 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225384052035 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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