The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
The given bar chart, percentagewise illustrates the relation between unemployed graduate males and females between the ages of 20-24 years, over a span of 2 years, in a European country.
From the chart, it is clear that the percentage of unemployed women is the low as compared to their counterparts, for both years. However, the highest unemployment rate of female as well as male graduates can be seen in the month of October, 2009, where it is about 15% and 22% respectively.
The lowest amount unemployed adults can be observed in the months of April and July in the year 2008, where they were at an equal 7% for men and 6% for women, the same percentage was also noticed for women in April 2009. A large difference between the two genders, of nearly 8% can be seen during October’09.
During October 2008 and 2009, it can be seen that unemployment rates are at its highest, whereas a steady decline is observed during first half of both the years.
In conclusion, in the span of 2 years, the percentage of women with jobs is higher with respect to men of same age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'October 2009'.
Suggestion: October 2009
...e graduates can be seen in the month of October, 2009, where it is about 15% and 22% respecti...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e year 2008, where they were at an equal 7% for men and 6% for women, the same pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72395833333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7619689032 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6999974929 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174443138108 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824760829043 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718096234912 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100054985171 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752293467571 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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