The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is important to consider how the online shopping impact on commercial business. Some people think that online shopping will cease all traditional markets. I am totally agree with this statement, and in this essay I am going to illustrate that with examples.
Firstly, since most of the products are available on online markets therefore, it is more convenient for customers to search the websites and find what they need. For instance, online markets like Amazon, Souq have all products that exist in cities shops. Also, online shopping saves the time wasted in traditional shopping. For example, customers can order online goods while traveling or staying at home.
Secondly, online shops offer competitive prices in order to attract more and more customers, and the main reason for online goods low prices is that business owner do not have to rent shops or markets to present products to customers. Also, the chance that customers have to compare between different prices of the same product, which allow them to choose the lowest price. To illustrate, online markets like amazon offer the same item but from different seller with different prices. Not only that, the website perform comparing and filtering service between these products which makes it more easy for the customer to select the suitable product.
In conclusion, due to availability of products, time-saving and lower prices than traditional shopping, I tend to believe that online shopping will to cease towns and cities markets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...e all traditional markets. I am totally agree with this statement, and in this essay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54746620092 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6470878636 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187863184154 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777200055381 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519258235942 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124790976127 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160893069094 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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