Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that extra refugees should be accepted by rich nations and give them standard help, like housing and food.This essay agrees with the statement because those states do have extra resources to support more people and it can be a good opportunity to those refugees to start a new life.
More refugees should be accepted by wealthy countries as they have enough resources to help them. Having extra population requires more health centers and schools which those nations do have the ability to build as and when it is needed. For instance, Germany as one of the richest countries in Europe, last year accepted thousands of refugees and all the basic help was provided to them and more schools were built to accommodate more student from their children.
Saving generation is another reason why rich countries should accept extra refugees. They are people who fled from their countries due to war looking for other states where they can have a chance to work and support their families to start a new life. For example, during Iraq war a lot of Iraqis moved to Canada as refugees and been able to secure new jobs to help their families and they were able to start a new life.
In conclusion, Wealthy nations should accept extra refugees and help them as they are financially able to provide the resources needed for those people, and they have job opportunities where they can work and start a new life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...em standard help, like housing and food.This essay agrees with the statement because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81300813008 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35364449495 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479674796748 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5139787939 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231902495247 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124312027427 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085500003701 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159827269017 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731497323881 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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