Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that, while TV is useful just for amusement, there are those who say that television is beneficial for learning. This essay will argue that, although most people watch sports activities on TV which makes it and entertainment tool, I believe that other useful programs for learning are also podcasted on television.
In the modern era, TV has become a tool for entertainment thanks to the sports channels. Currently, plenty of tournaments are available during the year, which can be watched on TV with an affordable monthly subscription, people will be able to get access to several sports channels and enjoy it during their free time. To illustrate, according to an article on Gulf times Newspaper, the number of subscribers on Bein Sports has increased since they added more channels to cover more sports activities. However, I believe that TV cannot be only useful for entertainment.
On the other hand, there are some people say that TV is useful for learning as it has some educational channels. That is to say that, there are channels that podcasts useful programs which people can benefit from on their day-to-day life, as well as other useful information for their self-development and knowledge. For example, I watch daily a program podcast by Dsience channel called '' How it is made '' in which I was enlightened on plenty of things on how they are made and my knowledge on many fields was developed. I believe that TV is beneficial for education.
In conclusion, although TV is beneficial just for amusement due to the availability of sports activity channels, I believe that the fruitful programs that some TV channels podcasts are what makes it a useful tool for education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90240607421 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485915492958 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.841358133 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308820787421 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156877571832 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116411650339 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211698307806 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826235199329 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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