Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request my enrollment in the computer course about which I came across in the newspaper today this morning.
I am a mechanical engineering student however I have always had interest in computer programming. Despite the fact that I do not have any formal degree in computers I have won several informal coding challenges conducted by the infamous coding site "HackerEarth". With time I have gained good knowledge in computer languages like java, c,c++,python and angular by reading concepts over the internet. I immensely want to pursue and learn this course.
Although this course is only for people who have completed the elementary course I request you to please check if any special exception could be made which would allow me to enroll in the course as I possess the required basic computer skills.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Saba Azam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , c
...ledge in computer languages like java, c,c++,python and angular by reading concept...
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Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , python
...e in computer languages like java, c,c++,python and angular by reading concepts over th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27516778523 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08010553924 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704697986577 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1408181803 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360791528457 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117991374724 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873260052731 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176422079586 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896236111766 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.