The life of humans is believed to have been simplified by the internet ; thus, it is considered to be positive by some people in this contemporary world, while others contradict this point of view and more emphasis on the libraries. Further, both the contradictory opinions of the people are yet to be discussed in the following paragraphs.
using the internet seems to be effective in some of the certain ways. Firstly, its usage is very lucrative in terms of saving precious time as modern people tend to have a busy schedule for doing their works; hence, they do not have enough time to go library in order to read the books. Meanwhile, it becomes convenient for them to use the internet for getting information in a short period of time. Secondly, the internet makes the formidable correlations among the readers because there are myriad of users, who are ambitious to grasp from internet, and therefore, it leads to the enhancement of learning with each other.
Though the internet is said to be worthwhile for mankind in this advance time period, yet the role of libraries cannot be overlooked. The first and foremost benefit is peaceful ambiance; thereby, learners can enhance the concentration without any kind of mental distraction. Apart from this, libraries are fully equipped with an impressive collection of old books written by different authors, whereas these are not possible on the internet.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, learning is always a long-lasting process, whether it is from the library or the internet. consequently, the learners should have a similar choice to grasp as much as possible in this competitive world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08424908425 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90709868442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1936850444 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226519389658 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828802868629 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527750493675 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130892467073 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562304853445 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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