Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
• thank them for the invitation
• mention what plans you already have
• suggest when you can meet them
Dear Mr and Mrs Roy,
I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting us in the party that you are holding at your home next saturday. However, owing to the other conspicuous plans to go out with the family members, I am unable to attend this auspicious occasion.
I am having to go with my kids for the celebration of their friend's birthday. Suddenly ,we got the invitation from the them to attend the birthday party. So, this is the first , i have to go with my kids for their happiness. Being a good parent, I cannot repudiate to this plan of my kids.
I make sure for celebrating the party, we can meet you on a weekend and have some quality time together.Please let me know when you can do that.
Wishing you a grand party and quality time with your guests.
Yours sincerely,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion of their friends birthday. Suddenly ,we got the invitation from the them to a...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...y. Suddenly ,we got the invitation from the them to attend the birthday party. So, this ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he birthday party. So, this is the first , i have to go with my kids for their hap...
^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...end and have some quality time together.Please let me know when you can do that. Wi...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an do that. Wishing you a grand party and quality time with your guests. Yo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47972972973 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53643331999 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7888872554 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364335472029 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137006756704 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950623287054 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15705753728 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114441181623 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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