Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Recently, management of environmental pollution has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "who is responsible to manage it?". Whereas it is a widely held view that government must be liable to face with this issue, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the environmental policy standpoint, environment conservation is bound up inextricably with hazard situation, which indicates it leads to both air and marine pollution. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between manufacturing products and marine industry as well as an exponential increase in deposit. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of nuclear power is correlated positively with not only greenhouse gases but also dioxide emission.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, air pollution attribute to individual, in that it would come down to polluted street, smock gas, and engine car. A salient example of such attribution is bus, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take time shortage for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint global warming problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to traffic congestion, easy access to rural area, and even planting tree. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government to provide more roads and facilitate public transportation.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that new strategic plans must be into taken to deal with this challenge. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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- Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this change 88
- With the advancement in technology, the number of computers being used in the field of education has increased. Some people believe that there will be no role of teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- Mass media 11
- Students with degree earn high salary than who doesn't have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion? 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67567567568 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13822075555 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 139.433497537 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699324324324 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4473859962 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1085207528 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287763647404 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462564295032 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650120288495 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051115118134 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 55.0591133005 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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