Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Society is more and more development, mainly in cities, so young people in many countries often leave rural areas to study or work in cities. There are some advantages and also some disadvantages. In this essay, I will give my own opinion.
First, going to cities means young people will have more chances to expose modern educating, find a better job with a higher salary. In cities, the government often invests more than in rural such as traffic, hospital, school... Moreover, many people come to study or work will contribute to the development of the city, because young people will make a lot of products and contribute to the economic development of the country, bringing it to compete with the world.
Second, besides that have some disadvantages such as the rate unemployed will rise because of many people but few jobs. In addition, the rate of crime also increases and governments will harder to control. More people also mean the environment more polluted, traffic jams become more frequent. One thing worries about is the balance of the population. Some places are too many people, some places are too few people, few workers so the economy is underdeveloped, hence the countryside is still poor.
In conclusion, The fact that young people leave the countryside to go to the city to study and work has both advantages and disadvantages, the government should strictly control that migration so as not to imbalance the population and ensure everyone has a safe and happy life.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.992 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75624091835 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0162521118 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259249176919 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864947788627 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964427200393 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17677681824 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922436577067 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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