some people think that all university students should study whatever they like, others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
university offer education for many aspects from music,art to science and technology and so forth.so,university is place where students study more and make plan to orient their future. a question which makes both students and their parents difficult to choose, is students should pursuit their passion or hot field. personally, i suppose that studying subject will develop in future will be better.
firstly, if student learn what they are keen on, they can fulfill their passion. this might make them happy and rewarding. besides, feeling of being done favorite things encourages them studious and spend more time on those things. consequently, reaching success in that fields is easier than other aspect.
on the other hand, studying on-trend subject or which will be necessary in the future helps students to find a good jib which results to a stable career and guarantees their future. a famous speaker( who i can not remember her name) used to say like that success creates passion rather than passion leads to success. when you do something well, you get many money from that or someone need your job, you will reach success that can become your hobby.
while students chase success in what they do not like, they can do their favorite things to balance their life. and obviously, when they has succeeded, they absolutely have enough metal and physical condition to pursuit their passion. because of that, in university, students should learn what will create both stable life and opportunities to develop their passion in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10671936759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52005345918 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5937954616 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25519683208 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909669544272 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580795665589 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156454912707 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418517934999 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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