Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today.
What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?
traffics and long-distance routes are a common scenario in several cities these days. this essay will discuss the primary root cause of this problem is overpopulation and planned cities could improve this situation better.
Increase in a birth-rate increasing public, which requires a home to live and transport facilities. In other words, people are widespread in different locations to get better housing facilities. Majority of the public do not use public transport, which leads bottleneck on some roads in peak hours. people are not able to find a place to live in crowded societies; they are forced to live in city outskirts, which drivers them to cover the long-distance for their daily needs. For example, the survey conducted by The times in March 2019 reported that 70% of Pune people, lives in a nearby rural area as they are not financially strong to get home into the city.
To overcome this situation, the government should plan the city with better facilities such as educational, hospital and transportation service to commute to workplaces for people. this reason is organised cities map gives the proper direction of a housing society or any wide roads to control high congestion. With the help of discipline societies, people would never face the issue of longer travel time or traffic congestion. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in June 2011 stated that Chandigarh city is designed in such a way, it could absorb the population twice of its space with the help of a designed map.
To conclude, this essay suggests many cars driven by the public is a potential cause of any road jam or long travel time. it could be improvised by the government with better development plans for cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76126166312 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.564193961 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240133615207 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789429226753 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718678126074 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16180571608 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826543871011 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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