Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care this was not so in the past wat may be the root cause of this behaviour Discuss the reason and possible

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care this was not so in the past wat may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reason and possible.

beauty products in terms of variety and popularity has observed a boom from last decade . features considered unattainable are now achieved via cosmetics by both men and women. over usage has caused plethora of issues. In the looming paragraphs , causes and results are discussed.

now a days people are turning to beauty care for achieving desirable features has become a trend amongst women as well as men. Plenty of reasons contribute towards this. Firstly, peer pressure contributes a major chunk in it. To present themselves as popular and beautiful in the group they turn to cosmetics for improving physical features as constructed by society that make up beauty is better than natural beauty. Secondly, major actors and personalities promote beauty products, attracting people . The notion of becoming perfect gives a push to the thought set of becoming “picture perfect”.
over dependence on makeup has led to various catastrophies which led to devastation of lives of people. Furthermore excess utilisation I curable skin ailments which can even lead to lethal situations. Moreover , a person looses self-confidence without makeup. becoming too much dependent on cosmetics leads to self degradation and leads to declining the natural beauty.
In gist, cosmetics can be used to enhance natural beauty to some extent however beauty lies in the eyes of beholder. Overuse will nor bear fruitful result rather will have a devastating outcome earlier people realised and understood the concept of natural beauty which must be understood by the present generation rather than using those chemicals recklessly

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4780876494 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95829267968 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1772349292 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136174450337 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440698811799 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470635539038 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762219692838 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484522357257 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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