You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in.
Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some important documents when I was staying at your place in Australia. I humble request you to please return the file by post.
I visited Australia for attending two days business seminar on Customer Marketing and Advertising” as it would ai me in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me to stay at your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your family and you were a great host.
When I arrive at my office on 29th September, I realized that I had left some critical documents in the room I stayed in, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They were placed in a blue file with the name Prabhpreet Kaur printed on the top of the file. They are very critical as they contain confidential and sensitive data
I would request you to kindly return the file through the post as soon as possible and please do share the delivery number so that I can keep a track of the package.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...was staying at your place in Australia. I humble request you to please return the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou to please return the file by post. I visited Australia for attending two day...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t you allowed me to stay at your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34389140271 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4551504148 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8846964293 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8461538462 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510122597465 0.216113520407 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176722510272 0.0766984524023 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914277585697 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235675272814 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128813724473 0.0580467560999 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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