The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
Yeah according to the bar chart above we could know the people in England that are living alone by themselves. And we can clearly see that after the age of 50 the male that are living alone by themselves are becoming lesser and lesser while the rate of the female getting lonely is becoming higher and higher.
Now let’s have a look at the pie graph above this pie graph shows the number of bedrooms in one-person households, in England and we can clearly see that there are 28.0% of people that has one bedroom in their house and there are 35.4% people that have two-bedroom in their house also there are 29.8% which is nearly 30% of people that has three bedrooms in their house even know they are living by themselves and also there are nearly ten percent of people that has four or five or even more bedrooms in their house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
... has three bedrooms in their house even know they are living by themselves and also ...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...hemselves and also there are nearly ten percent of people that has four or five or even...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48701298701 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1124665105 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.157807869 43.030603864 412% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.333333333 112.824112599 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 22.9334400587 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193685208917 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121730950014 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444133572371 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139423656146 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00565237315612 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.2329268293 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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