You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear George,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to aprise you that I have missed my wallet at your home. Could you please send it back to me in the address which I mentioned back of this letter.
I would like to thank for the accommodation where you have given in your home was quite surprised. Because i didn't anticipate that the whole last week you have provided hospitality, food, and beverages. Especially, we drove to the Niagra falls which was excited and felt eager to see the view. Even it was quite crowded but, it is tremendous to look at the scenary on the edge of the house. As I was rush to the airport, i had forgotten my wallet in your bedroom which is on the second floor. Besides, it has a driving license, identification number which we need to show it the toll when we cross the county. Therefore, please send it back to me at the earliest. I am looking forward to receiving from you.
Yours honestly,
Abc

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...our home was quite surprised. Because i didnt anticipate that the whole last week you...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he house. As I was rush to the airport, i had forgotten my wallet in your bedroom...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, honestly, if, look, second, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34857142857 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51049064235 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611428571429 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2959041506 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4166666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332447359824 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119578911318 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860082017153 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288602472083 0.12726935374 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573191667135 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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