You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have moved
• describe the new house
• invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Anna,
Hi, how are how? It has been a long time since we last spoke or met and I hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my happiness and excitement of moving to a new and bigger house.
As you know our earlier dwelling was very small for our family of four and we had been looking for a suitable place for quite sometime. There were only two bedrooms with a single bathroom, a small kitchen and living room. Moreover, the place felt stuffy as it was not well ventilated leading to respiratory issues as well.
I am glad to tell you that our new house is not only spacious and comfortable but also very well furnished. It has four bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a humongous living and dining room and a fully equipped kitchen. Furthermore, there are a few pleasantly surprising add ons such as a big lawn in the front which can be used for hosting guests, a big garage and a separate storage room.
Well, what are you doing this Sunday? I have kept a small house warming party and It would be great fun to have you here. My new address is Flat number 50, First Floor, New Friends Colony, New Delhi.
Hope to see you this weekend. Keep in touch.
Lots of love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...touch. Lots of love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43421052632 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32465656872 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635964912281 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8374706173 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20808681484 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641793859497 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671762408995 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122902769755 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767311193396 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.