You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear………………………
You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
• explain the situation and why you cannot continue the course
• say what you would like to do about your studies
• ask for advice about what you can do about the situation
Dear Ms. Smith
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am a student of an English course at your institution. I found the complete course too informative, though I feel sorry to inform you that I have to leave the batch in middle due to some unforeseen situation.
my father got a heart attack and he is hospitalized in AIIMS hospital in Delhi. As I am a single child of my family, so I have a responsibility to go over there and help him in his bad time.
I am not sure when I will be able to back. Also, I have completed the syllabus and remaining with assignments. it would be possible if I could submit all assignments online to you. it would be a great help for me.
I would be a privilege, if you could help me with any other possible option, in order to continue my studies.
Once again, my apologies for the enforced absence. I hope you will understand my situation and provide me some better solution.
Yours Faithfully,
Aman Kansal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-05 | erman..duran95 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-05 | erman.duran95 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52352941176 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78577702504 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2575012061 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206658740343 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665754633082 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634078475595 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109990515302 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687002117357 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.