You received an invitation from a friend to go out for a day and accepted, but you were unable to go as promised. Write an apology letter to you friend & say.
Why couldn't you make it?
How did you try to reach him /her?
Suggest how you will make up for it another time?
Dear Ayushi,
I am writing this letter to apologise you because I was not able to accompanied you in a one day picnic with our school's friends group for which I promised. As I had emergency call from my company to attend the urgent meeting which made me unable to caught the train.
When I completed my meeting, I thought to joined you for the rest of the time. Although I tried hard to search about another mode of transport by which I could commute to reached at our picnic spot, I did not get any public transport or private vehicle that could assist me to arrived there within the time. Even if I tried my best to reach there, I could not come. That is why, I thought other way through which we can enjoy together.
As we will have holidays in next month, we can organise get-together again. To make our day memorable, we can arrange theme party in which we will have fun by doing various activities such as dancing and playing games. Along with this, we will order some delicious food. If you are ready for my given suggestions, I assure you that we will have the best time together.
Hoping the positive response from you!
Yours Lovingly,
Meghavi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ols friends group for which I promised. As I had emergency call from my company to...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...meeting, I thought to joined you for the rest of the time. Although I tried hard ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55399061033 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35477719629 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7982281195 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238187282321 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926959883534 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936526826792 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169711030497 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600958990783 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.