Many animal species in the world are become extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many animal species are dying out because of some reasons as well as human are also facing many issuss.In this essay all the basic reasons will lighten up and the best opinion from my view will be declared in the conclusion.
The one side of coin, human blindly run behind materialastic things for their comfort and laxurios lifestyle. To achieve all laxuries people are working down to dust, because of this they have no time to look after their family and social life; health is also affected because of overload work and hactic schedul which is cause of stress and health issuss. The innovation is blindly followed by human and industries get try to fullfill requirment by increasing production and for that they need more and more expantion which allow them to deforestation and make concrite jungles. As due to deforestation environment become unbalanced and it become a hazardious for every living species on world. As I can say in preset time the problem which are dangours for mankind, they are only responsible for that.
The other side of coin, the animal species are up to it's end because of lack of habitat for their living. Other major fector for dicreasing population of flora and fluna is some medical companies are use animals as product testing object and after the experiments they can not survive and lost their life.But the thing is animals are very important part of sarrounding. It is also a part of environment and basic food chain, if we lost the animal species the environmental balance become unstable and it is not good for human also. Animals are beautiful creature of nature and they ave also right to live. If we lost the flora and fluna then up coming generation will be not able to know about the natural beauty.
To conclude, the animal is important to maintain the environmental balance and to survival of mankind. So, people should focaus to protect the animals from dying out instade of looking their own problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86350148368 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55842455309 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2154288452 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25091886375 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871029976841 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644208917663 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161476553048 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498929862749 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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