Now a lot of people in collage are doing academic study.We should encourage them to learn vocational skill(like plumbers and electricians).
Do you agree or disagree
As we have now entered an age of education, masses are trying to learn all subjects with skills. It is frequently believe that, Scholar study is being did while other said that college learners should be encouraged to teach vocational skills. However, I agree with former view, following paragraph will intend to analyse my view on this approach.
To embark with, students should learn their academic subject because it will help a lot to their job.If collage learners learn their particular subject than they can able to earn good marks with highlighted degree and it will help to give better job in future for them. In addition, students should do more work on academic study rather than working on vocational skills, because vocation skills can not help for gain better salary for employee.For example, recent survey found that majorities of vocational employees had been facing struggles about to their work because they did very well, but they cannot earn more salaries.
Besides this, there are a vast chances while doing vocational activities. Masses do that types of activities then their health is in hazards situation. This means they may be unable to treat very their injuries because to less earning. Another major reason about my concern is about is on employment. Because of a huge range of vocational employees, there may a great impact on economic growth of nation. Take lowest economical nation have faced job problems due to range of vocational employees as an example.
In conclusion, we should to encourage universities students about learn on vocational skill because their are many disadvantages outweigh advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21804511278 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61141577308 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3428949721 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202415637914 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685129522108 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496468813698 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123630778167 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030408544776 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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