People cart eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In this globalized world, it has been increasingly easier for people to eat various kinds of foods which are developed in other regions. Hence, more and more people opt for food manufactured in other countries than their regional food. Though this trend has some merits, I believe that its demerits are far more significant.
On the one hand, this tendency has some bright sides. The first one is that people have the chance to enjoy a new wide range of food, which might make their life more interesting. Having local food has been too popular for most people. So it might be more exciting for them to explore and try new types of food. For example, youngsters these days seem to be very happy when hanging out with friends in foreign food stores such as BBQ or Gong Cha, etc. This definitely gives them valuable and enjoyable experiences. In addition, imported food might be beneficial for their health, especially those which are grown in developed countries such as Japan, Australia or European group (such as Korean beef). Indeed, there has been a growing concern about toxic food produced by Vietnamese in recent years. Therefore, if Vietnamese people can diversify their daily diet, they will less likely to suffer from being poisoned.
On the other hand, I would argue that there are great drawbacks related to this trend. Firstly, this might cause a negative impact on local residents. Since fewer people are interested in regional agricultural products, it would be difficult for these kinds of foods to be sold out. For example, Vietnamese people are now keen on Thaid fruits such as mangos or rambutans, which are usually sweater and tasty. As a result, local farmers who are specializing in planting those trees gradually become unemployed. Moreover, the national economy might degrade significantly as local crops are being diminished and we have to import food from other nations. Even worse, there have been cases when some countries find ways to export bad food to other territories.
In conclusion, there are both bright and dark sides when people favor foreign food. However, I believe the disadvantage overshadow its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.081232493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54922891374 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6436575243 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.380952381 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401732110808 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113555121494 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766712658786 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253885707809 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879950774729 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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