Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unneccessarily.
Why do people buy things they do not really need?
Do you think this is a good thing?
Purchasing new items frequently could be interesting with many people, although some claimed that they have never used these product at the time they bought. In my point of view, I believe this practice could affect customers in negative ways.
There could be one compelling reason why individuals were lured into buying unneccessary products. Since people may not aware that they have been targeted by varies company which are master in sales knowledge, in other words, they know how make people buy their items. In fact, there are numerous of marketing campaigns launched on mass media every month, and it has created a phenomenon which psychologist namely as F.O.M.O (or Fear Of Missing Opportunity) that could affect the customers to act differently than usual. By influencing and luring customer with a though that sooner or later, they would need to use this product, thereby, purchase it at the moment should be a right choice.
For example, a person, after spending hours to concentrate on performing well in his workplace, may found that he is leaving his local store to commute home with a bag full of unneccessary things, which cost him almost half of his monthly income while he though it could be useful in the future. This could be a barely result of how things can go with improperly personal finance management a person may have.
In conclusion, it is crucial that people could understand what factor might affect their choice when they do shopping. It is worth to consider if things individual want to buy are needed or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'these products'?
Suggestion: this product; these products
... some claimed that they have never used these product at the time they bought. In my point of...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...enon which psychologist namely as F.O.M.O or Fear Of Missing Opportunity that cou...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('barely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('result') instead of another adjective.
... be useful in the future. This could be a barely result of how things can go with improperly pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57439333908 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674329501916 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1425711285 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241064904088 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934403974292 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062734275017 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148876003257 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786804779519 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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