Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am penning down this epistle regarding a worsening problem with the parking for employees.
During the last three months, finding a free parking spot has become a serious issue for the employees as a new shopping mall has been opened close by. Many have to look for a free spot even more than 30 minutes. Nevertheless, I believe this issue is resolvable by changing the first floor to parking as it is absolutely empty.
This can help employees in different ways such as having a spot for themselves and spending less time finding a free one. In addition, it will increase their safety as it will be a place inside the building which is more secure. I hope you react as soon as you receive this letter.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 61 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-11 | Sorena Eshkoor | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54240565815 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2651704407 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158149855074 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580290471446 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283215115757 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070088147335 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416942980615 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.