Dear Mr.Rasouli
I am Farhood Salami your neighbor. Firstly I would appreciate you for management apartment activities especially central antenna repair.
After that, I'm so sorry for expressing a big problem. It's been a while at night the sound of loud music coming from your house which is a big nuisance to us. Not only we often lose sleep but also in the morning my daughter can't wake up to go to school early.
In addition, I'm advocate of music and listening to music is on my daily schedule. The difference is that I prefer to listen to the soft music.
Finally, I have a special offer, hereby we invite you and your family to a weekend party. I think listening to music and dancing until midnight on the weekend doesn't bother anyone.
As well as, I suggest banning listening to loud music during the week after 10pm in the apartment.
Yours sincerely
Farhood Salami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rasouli
Dear Mr.Rasouli I am Farhood Salami your neighbor. F...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ly central antenna repair. After that, Im so sorry for expressing a big problem. ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eep but also in the morning my daughter cant wake up to go to school early. In addi...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...up to go to school early. In addition, Im advocate of music and listening to musi...
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Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d dancing until midnight on the weekend doesnt bother anyone. As well as, I suggest b...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0pm in the apartment. Yours sincerely Farhood Salami
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70322580645 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52161519352 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3581528761 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316959292336 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102646327284 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478435912772 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141226886285 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027344126887 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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