In order to reduce crime, some argue that attacking its cause like poverty is the best solution, while others believe that putting more people in prisons and having more policemen are more convenient way in tackling crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A group of people maintain that it is crucial to be neat at the both home and workplace, by organizing and putting everything in right position. I am of this opinion for two major reasons.
To begin with, tidiness could easily result in a good sense of satisfaction. this may happen because tidy places are both more attractive and convenient; when all elements of a house or a workplace are in harmony with the each other, and they have been managed in a proper way, the residents or employees would enjoy and feel happy. this atmosphere may positively affect them to have an enjoyable and beautiful life. For example, at a tidy home or office you can find everything easier and faster than a messy one, and this truly can convey a great sense of pleaser and satisfaction with their lifestyle.
Another reason why an organized and disciplined home or workplace is important would be success. Most people, especially employers, equate tidiness and discipline with responsibility and reliability, which are the key factors to be succeed in every aspect of human’s life. they believe that these people are more likely to meet the deadlines and make a commitment to their responsibilities. Moreover, such people possess more efficiency and productivity than a messy one, therefore they are more likely to get promotion and improve their personal and professional life.
Some may argue that tidiness is not an important issue in their personal and working life. Sometimes discipline would be time-consuming and bothering, especially in the case of lake of time; however, I believe not only could an organized and disciplined home or office save our time, but it also may reduce our stress levels in that case. For instance, when I have spent time on well preparation of my tasks, I always do it in a proper way without any hesitation.
In conclusion, I believe that not only would discipline and tidiness at both home and workplace cause a sense of happiness and enjoyment, but it would also result in success at their both home and work life, so I advocate to this opinion, and it would be better for the common good if the officials take the importance of disciplined people into account for hiring in sensitive work positions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93931398417 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87063722158 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517150395778 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1847715105 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132705605014 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495656531087 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548613893276 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744667558479 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328940014579 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.