In order to reduce crime, some argue that attacking its cause like poverty is the best solution, while others believe that putting more people in prison and having more policemen are more convenient way in tackling crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinions.
Criminal activities are disgrace for a civilized society. To curb crime rate, a group of individuals support the idea that we must eradicate its root cause such as poverty, whereas others think that we must put more convicts behind the bars and recruiting more police force are more apt solutions to deal with unlawful activities. In any opinion, it is like two sides of a same coin which can be dealt by uplifting poor people by providing education and increasing number of cops in order to put defaulters in jail.
To begin with, illiteracy is the biggest hurdle that pushes unprivileged section of the society towards unlawful activities. We must collectively work towards its root cause which eventually leads them to unemployment. By imparting knowledge we will be enabling them to understand things in black and white and save them from criminal minded people who lure individuals from lower strata on the pretext of brighter future. Recently, a NGO in Delhi has started an initiative to educate slum dwellers so that they can learn new skillset and lead a dignified life.
On the flip side, government must ensure that law is being followed diligently for which they need to increase police workforce. According to the stats shared by a leading journal, Delhi has 5 cops for every thousand citizens which is very less if compared with other developing nations. If we deploy more boots on ground then they can cover every nook and corner of the nation and make it a safer place to live-in. Additionally, increase in law enforcement personnel will not only help in putting an end to criminal activities, but also they can lend a helping hand in solving pending cases. Thereby, putting culprits behind the bars and setting a stern example among criminal community.
To conclude, we must nip the evil in the bud by providing educational and vocational knowledge to poor people and simultaneously, station more cops on street and put evaders in jail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e pretext of brighter future. Recently, a NGO in Delhi has started an initiative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96352583587 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73124955544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6053958248 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154565793535 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469525375082 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582537113603 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103455818739 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763412592978 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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