Individuals should improve the environment or is it the government and large companies that should take action?
It is being long debated topic, for over a century, weather people, government or giant corporate should take effective measures in rectifying our environment. I believe, it must be a combined effort of every individual, government and big enterprises as each contributor has a specific role to play in uplifting our environmental condition.
To begin with, people think that they have limited resources, in terms of money, to fix our atmosphere, but they forget that we can take tiny steps in our everyday life to make a difference. People can contribute by switching to green initiatives, suggested by government, whenever possible like using solar energy, rainwater harvesting, switching off Air Conditioners when not in use, and lots more. Citizens must plant trees and spread awareness among their circle For example, our society members have planted and adopted over 700 trees in a span of 2years and we have switched over 50 families on solar water heater, which not only saves environment but saves on electricity bills.
On the other hand, efforts put in by individuals certainly makes a difference, but they have small impact overall. Government and giant companies can make a big difference as that can plunge in more funds. Big companies can collaborate with government to invest in researching new way to improve our environment. Simultaneously, government can make new law that gives tax relaxation to people or companies that are using green way in order to create awareness in those who don’t. A best example would be of HCL Technology, HCL employees has planted more than 2 lakh saplings, in sector 150 Noida, in a span of 2 years. HCL and government are now looking after them in collaboration and their survival rate is over 80 percent.
To my mind, improving our environment is a collective effort of all, (individuals, government and big entities) and all of us play a specific role in fixing it. To summarise, people must adapt toward green ways of living and government and large organisation must collaborate to find ways to improve environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 486, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...eate awareness in those who don't. A best example would be of HCL Technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13196480938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02788160437 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0893875543 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.615384615 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186988133075 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642941930804 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496780116523 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108202121239 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474994677224 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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