Task 2: Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people are wedded to the idea that nations should attempt to manufacture all food sources to meet the demand for their own domestic use and minimize the import of these items, in order that the prosperity of countries will be maintained. Personally, I wholly agree with this opinion.
It is widely acknowledged that there are two prime reasons behind the self-production of local food in many regions comprise a huge benefit. The fundamental reason is that when stimulating local residents to produce all their food, the government will allocate a great amount of money to improve their technology. The integration of cutting-edge technology into agriculture sector is extremely essential because it accelerates the input materials for the food manufacturing industry. Additionally, accompanying with the development of agriculture, the unemployed rate will be mitigated which may exerts a positive effect on the vigorous growth of local economy. China perfectly exemplifies this circumstance, the government always try to encourage domestic food production, thereby creating more jobs for their citizens.
I strongly believe that any countries should alleviate the amount of imported food. Firstly, in many nations people have a tendency to choose some kinds of food which are imported from overseas countries due to the lack of their cognitive abilities. For example, in Vietnam citizens tend to buy imported food instead of local products because they believe that the quality of these items is superior to the commodities in their countries. Consequently, it may pose an adverse threat to the domestic food products.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the local authorities should figure out some optimal solution to facilitate the monopoly of their local food as well as restrict the amount of food imported into the inland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45296167247 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00227547886 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4924294136 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281321899439 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107776914583 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591134119643 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183235586763 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258074014988 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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