Some people believe that video games do a lot of good to those who play them. Others argue that, they are harmful. In my view, there are more advantages than disadvantages of playing video games.
On the one hand, there are drawbacks to playing video games. Gaming can be highly addictive. Users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. For instance, many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. If they did not waste their time playing video games, they would not experience negative effects such as problems at school or lack of sleep.
On the other hand, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, users or gamers are transported into a virtual world which is often more exciting than real-life pastimes. For example, children tend
- The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. 73
- the diagram below shows the process of milk production 56
- the diagram below shows the process of milk production 56
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.To what extent do you agree or disagre 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84415584416 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39440512758 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720779220779 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2390427934 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8181818182 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270389274371 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988684983466 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125603565407 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182275126911 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125914845527 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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