Many of us believe teaching offspring at home is essential for a child's growth but whilst the rest of them suggest it is predominant to learn at institutions will give more prospects than learning at home. In my opinion, teaching essential things at home would give much opportunity to know about the world practically, because offspring perceives what should they in advance. But, learning at school or institution would devote a diverse culture, co-operation and how to deal with the problems.
In my first view, there are abundant benefits which children would acquire if they propose to study in their home. Parents would always scrutinize the offspring, as a result, they do not get disruption in their learning. Moreover, children can learn a diverse thing which is out of the syllabus, which means they could learn anything that they wish. Whilst, they could easily absorb everything when relating to the real-world entities.
On the other hand, children who choose the path to study in the institution would devote enormous benefits. children could cooperate with students will lead a friendly environment. As a matter of fact, Lonon University Research Center unveiled the result of public opinion on why children opt to study in the home rather than school. As a consequence, 75.2% of people voted for study at school is best than home. Furthermore, children can learn what are the necessities for life and methods of teaching will impulse the creativity and imagination of the student from the institute of the study. Even though it will culminate to pursue the process of learning but surely students will get improvised.
To recapitulate, learning at home would give the attention on what you want to do but studying at the institution would devote the best environment for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...itution would devote enormous benefits. children could cooperate with students will lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08783783784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601518962 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2999974035 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248060583491 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908291584052 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715464023955 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155190571438 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668933465798 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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