The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are variety ways for reaching to success in life. Some people believe that graduate from the university or academic institutes lonely cannot be guarantee people’s achievement. In my opinion, Although these institutions will have positive impacts on person’s successful at the future, but they are not sufficient at all.
In order to become achievement in life, in according to recent research, people should have be several factors such as, job satisfaction, loving family, good relationship with other people, and earn money. In academic institutes individuals just learn one or two fields that are completely restriction and based on experiences in other nations that may be do not have been efficiency in your country. In addition, you have to spend a long time for learning whole life requirements in these organs. For these reasons, persons should look for other ways for reaching to success, such as, consult with the craftsman about job requirements, and study books related to own culture in order to be familiar with the people’s characteristic.
However, we should accept this fact that, in some aspects of life, such as earn a good salary in factory, or get a promotion, employer prefer to employ people that have been an academic education from university. Thus, having a university degree or technical certificate from a scientist institution can assist to this subject.
To sum up, albeit graduate from university may assist to achievement in some aspects of life such as applying for a good job, but in my viewpoint it is not enough lonely at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... to recent research, people should have be several factors such as, job satisfacti...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ship with other people, and earn money. In academic institutes individuals just le...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t have been efficiency in your country. In addition, you have to spend a long time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98965903347 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4715242264 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165854899799 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705267923987 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03432990542 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951215491748 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057638112283 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.