Today people are travelling more than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
NOWADAYS, MOVEMENT OF INDIVIDUALS FROM ONE CITY OR REGION TO ANOTHER HAS BECOME A NOMINAL SCENARIO. EARLIER THIS WASN’T THE CASE. THERE ARE NUMBER OF REASONS BEHIND THIS UPGRADATION AND THIS ESSAY WILL ELABORATE SOME OF THEM.
FIRST AND FOREMOST, THE PHENOMAL DEVELOPMENT IN THE MODES OF TRANSPORTATION REPRESENTS THE ESCALATION IN MIGRATION. IN OTHER WORDS, THE INTRODUCTION OF VARIOUS MEANS OF TRANSPORT HAVE MADE IT EASIER FOR THE PASSENGERS TO MOVE TO DIFFERENT PLACES. ACCESSIBILITY HAS EASED THE TIME AND COMFORT WHILE TRAVELLING. THEREFORE, PEOPLE CAN APPROACH NEARBY OR FAR AWAY PLACE HASSLE-FREE. SECONDLY,MODERN REVOLUTION HAS REMARKABLY CHANGED THE WORKING PATTERNS AMONGST INDIVIDUALS.CORPORATE SECTOR HAVE STARTED ACTING AS MAGNETSFOR EVERYONE. WHEREAS, THE WORLD OF SUCH PROFESSION HAS BEEN SETUP IN SOME SPECIFIC REGIONS ONLY. AS A RESULT OF THIS, EMPLOYEES TEND TO MOVE TO SUCH REGIONS FREQUENTLY TO EMBARK THEIR FUTURE AND STANDBY IN THIS FASCINATING BUSSINESS. ACCORDING TO A RECENT SURVEY CONDUCTED BY INDIAN RAILWAYS, 75% OF PASSENGERS ARE OBSERVED TO BOOKING TICKETS FOR CITIES THAT ARE ACCLAIMED TO BE TECHNICAL HUBS SUCH AS PUNE, BANGLORE, ETC. THIRDLY, WITH THE GROWING COMPETITIVE WORLD EVERYBODY SUFFERS SUCH A HIGH AMOUNT OF PRESSURE THAT THEY NEED SOMETIME TO RELAX. TOURISM HAS BECOME THE MOST TRENDIEST WAY FOR RELAXATION. SO, MANY PEOPLE VISIT DIFFERENT PLACES TO TAKE A BREAK FROM THEIR NORMAL ROUTINE.
NOT ONLY DOES THE TRAVELLING SERVES SOME PURPOSE TO THE TRAVELLERS BUT ALSO GROOMS THEIR PERSONALITY TO A GREATER EXTENT. SUCH EXPERIENCES EMBARKS THE QUALITY OF INDEPENDENT LIVING AMONG HUMANS. THEY LEARN TO FETCH,COOK AND LIVE ON THEIR OWN. FURTHERMORE, THE LIMITS TO THE REGION ARE THE LIMITS TO THE WORLD. EXPLORING NEW PLACES ENHANCES THE OPPORTUNITIES,ENCOURAGES PEOPLE TO EARN ABOUT DIFFERENT LANGUAGES,CULTURES AND TRADITION. LASTLY, COMMUNICATION SKILLS ARE ALSO BENEFITED BY VISITING NEW PLACES AND MEETING DIFFERENT PEOPLE.
TO SUM UP, TOURISM HAS BECOME A MULTIMILLION DOLLAR INDUSTRY. WITH PASSING EVERY YEAR, THERE HAS BEEN SEEN A MAJOR RISE IN MOVING OF PEOPLE TO DIFFERENT PLACES EITHER FOR WORK OR FOR ENJOYMENT. THESE ESCALATIONS ARE INEVITABLY PROFITABLE TO THE CITIZENS AND TO THE SOCIETY.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... OR FAR AWAY PLACE HASSLE-FREE. SECONDLY,MODERN REVOLUTION HAS REMARKABLY CHANGED THE W...
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Message: “WHEREAS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... STARTED ACTING AS MAGNETSFOR EVERYONE. WHEREAS, THE WORLD OF SUCH PROFESSION HAS BEEN ...
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Message: Use only 'TRENDIEST' (without 'MOST') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: TRENDIEST
...METIME TO RELAX. TOURISM HAS BECOME THE MOST TRENDIEST WAY FOR RELAXATION. SO, MANY PEOPLE VIS...
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Suggestion: MOST the TRENDIEST
...METIME TO RELAX. TOURISM HAS BECOME THE MOST TRENDIEST WAY FOR RELAXATION. SO, MANY PEOPLE VIS...
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...NG NEW PLACES ENHANCES THE OPPORTUNITIES,ENCOURAGES PEOPLE TO EARN ABOUT DIFFERENT LANGUAGE...
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...PEOPLE TO EARN ABOUT DIFFERENT LANGUAGES,CULTURES AND TRADITION. LASTLY, COMMUNICATION SK...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, while, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51296829971 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24085407689 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625360230548 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8175905193 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1739130435 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146644801963 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331566245928 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480689270364 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831778156492 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246688838887 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.