Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
AT TIMES, JOY DEPENDS ON THE STAGE OF LIFE OF AN INDIVIDUAL. A LARGE GROUP OF INDIVIDUALS BELIEVE THAT ADOLESCENCE IS THE APPROPRIATE TIME TO BE DELIGHTED WHEREAS THE LATTER ACCLAIMS, THE ADULTHOOD FOR THE SAME. NEVERTHELESS, I BELIEVE HAPPINESS CAN NEVER DEPEND ON ANY PHASE OF LIFE AND CANNOT BE GENERALISED IN SUCH A WAY.
ACCORDING TO SOME SAYINGS, PUBERTY IS ONE OF THE MOST HAPPENING TIMES OF THE LIFE.CHANGE IN THE HORMONAL BALANCE LEADS TO WIDE VARIETY OF EXPERIENCES. SOME BITTER WILL SOME SWEET EXPLORATION MAKES THE JOURNEY OF LIFE ADVENTUORUS. AS A RESULT OF THIS, THERE IS A REMARKABLE ESCALATION IN LAUGHTER OF THE TEENAGERS. IN ADDITION TO THIS, ABSENCE OF HIGH END DUTIES ENABLES THE CHILDREN WITH AMPLE OF TIME TO SPEND WITH THEIR FRIENDS AND ENJOY. RELAXATION ACTS AS A MAJOR REASON FOR OCCURENCE OF JOYFUL MOMENTS. ACCORDING TO A RECENT SURVEY BY CHILD PSCHYCOLOGIST ORGANISATION OF INDIA, MENTAL STAGE DRIVE WAS CONDUCTED AND PEOPLE WERE CATEGORIZED UNDER THE HEADINGS HAPPY AND SAD. ABOUT 90% OF CANDIDATES UNDER THE HAPPY TITLE WERE IN ADOLESCENT STAGE.
WHEREAS, SOME SIGNIFICANT YOUTHS BELIEVE THAT JOYFUL MOMENTS HAVE JUST DOUBLED IN COMPARISON TO THE EARLIER STAGES OF THEIR LIFE. DESPITE THE FACT, THAT THEY ARE OBLIGATED TO FULFILL ENORMOUS EXPECTATIONS, FREEDOM ACTS AS A MAGNET TO THEIR PEACE OF MIND. FLEXIBILITY TO LIVE ON THEIR OWN TERMS ACTS AS PRINCIPLE ENABLER OF SATISFACTION WITH JOY. FURTHERMORE, UPGRADATION IN THE SOCIAL LIFE LEADS THE TO EXPERIENCE A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PHASE. THIS EXPOSURE ESCALATES THEIR CONTENTMENT.
IN MY OPINION, JOY IS JUST A KIND OF FEELING AND EXPRESSION WHICH CAN OCCUR AT ANY PERIOD OF TIME. I BELIEVE IT CANNOT BE GENERALISED ACCORDING TO THE AGE FACTOR. IN OTHER WORDS, EVERY INDIVIDUAL DIFFERENT PACE AND OCCURRENCE OF EVENTS IN THEIR LIFE. THEREFORE, IT COMPLETELY DEPENDS ON THE ENVIRONMENT WHICH IS VARIED AT EVERY PLACE. TO SUM UP, A PERSON CAN REMAIN HAPPY CONTENT EVEN AT EVERY STAGE OF THEIR LIFE, IT CERTAINLY DEPENDS ON THE INDIVIDUAL ITSELF.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05952380952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92353418899 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4742811723 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977245892755 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282047662224 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028231969513 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577688332727 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215997307345 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.