The presented bar chart indicates electricity produced and consumed in the top ten countries in 2014.
Looking from an overall prospective, it is apparent that except Germany, all other none countries consumption were marginally lower than their production.
As can be seen from the chart, China and the united states were ranked first and second top producers and also consumers of electricity. China by production 5,398 kWh consumed 5,322kWh. United states stood at the second position by producing 4,099 and consuming 3,866.
However, while other countries except for Germany which its production slightly lower than consumption (526.6 and 582.5 respectively), others include Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Korea produced more electricity than consumed, their production and consumption were significantly lower regarding China and the United States.
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 56
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 56
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 84
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ent that except Germany, all other none countries consumption were marginally lower than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84375 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78931415181 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6796875 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9083232289 43.030603864 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.6 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.23603664747 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164203724487 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103282148216 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843437924272 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119425063534 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874111506459 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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