Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, many of world's regions are in recessionary situation of houses. Lack of housin occurs because there was a lack of resale inventory as well as a lack of new construction inventory, which in turn was caused by a labor shortage, lack of housing. Likewise, overpopulation, big amount of immigrants and increasing in costs causing housing shortage.
The main reasons which cause shortage in housing is overcrowding. Day by day population of world is getting higher which leads to more demand in recourses. Moreover , home builders have to give a big amount of money for building houses and apartments. It should not be forgotten that for building accommodation businessmen have to pay for constructional materials, land, workers and for extra duties. All these duties and expenses lead businessmen to not build houses. Even when they do, these houses very expensive and people can not afford themselves to buy such houses. Besides, it is not a secret that for recent years number of immigrants has increased rapidly. For the sake of finding job or studying people move to another countries and regions. Consequently, government has to provide them with lodgment.
Conversely, it may be true that every problem have solution. Comparatively, homebuilders should start building apartment blocks instead of houses. This kind of policy will save more land and on contrary, will provide more people with home. Moreover, for immigrants community houses can be built. To illustrate, immigrants and their families should be sent to special community houses with all facilities and comforts. Admittedly, requirement for commodity will decrease .
It may be concluded that, overpopulation, marking up costs for materials and increasing in the rate of immigration can cause house crisis. Building apartment blocks and community houses can be the best option to solve accommodation note crisis. For the reason that apartment blocks allow to build more houses and community houses can accommodate more people .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun resale seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of resales'.
Suggestion: a lack of resales
...Lack of housin occurs because there was a lack of resale inventory as well as a lack of new cons...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ds to more demand in recourses. Moreover , home builders have to give a big amount...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creased rapidly. For the sake of finding job or studying people move to another ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...For the sake of finding job or studying people move to another countries and reg...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... requirement for commodity will decrease . It may be concluded that, overpopula...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
... the reason that apartment blocks allow to build more houses and community houses can ac...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...unity houses can accommodate more people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, conversely, likewise, may, moreover, so, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36708860759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01171541358 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.454390549 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7619047619 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171387484204 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549702068157 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442953542965 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106290180781 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298561633197 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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