Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, many of world's regions are in recessionary situation of houses. Lack of housing occurs because there are a big increasing in population rate, likewise a big amount of immigrants and increasing in costs causing housing shortage.
The main reasons which cause shortage in housing is overcrowding. Day by day population of world is getting higher which leads to more demand in recourse. Moreover, home builders have to give a big amount of money for building houses and apartments. It is important to remember that for building accommodation businessmen have to pay for construction materials, land, workers and for extra duties. All these duties and expenses lead businessmen to not build houses. Even when they do, these houses very expensive and people can not afford themselves to buy such houses. Besides, it is no a secret that for recent years number of immigrants has increased rapidly. In order to find job or study people move to another countries and regions, this in turn leads to more demand for commodities.
Conversely, in the public domain every problem have solutions. Particularly , homebuilders should start building apartment blocks instead of houses. Such policy will save more land and on contrary, will offer more people with home. Besides, for immigrants community houses can be built. In other words, immigrants and their families should be sent to special community houses with all facilities and comforts. As a direct result, there will not be demand for new commodities.
It can be concluded that , overpopulation, marking up costs for materials and increasing in the rate of immigration can cause house crisis. The best solution is building apartment blocks and community houses. For the reason that residential quarters allow to build more residence and community houses accommodate more people. As a direct result the rate of housing shortage will subside
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sinessmen to not build houses. Even when they do, these houses very expensive and...
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... commodities. It can be concluded that , overpopulation, marking up costs for ma...
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...For the reason that residential quarters allow to build more residence and commun...
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...mmunity houses accommodate more people. As a direct result the rate of housing sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, likewise, moreover, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26644736842 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86255856377 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.198517593 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.05 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179242510081 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582711924422 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420970818122 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117967793693 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377352225869 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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