Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People should never take critical decisions without consenting others. In my opinion, I do believe that different people knowledge and experience should be included when taking decisions.
People while taking decisions do not consider it important to ask for others opinion in that matter. The believe that they are more confident enough and have the erudition in taking the correct decision that will not only be beneficial for others but also for themselves. They do not realise that if the decision goes wrong it will create a lot of problems. People should as for others opinion before taking any decision as they might be able to provide a different perspective of a situation. Moreover, a person while taking decision can sometime be in bad and stressful temperament because of which he might not pay attention to any other factor and take wrong decisions.
Furthermore, people should ask for suggestions from others as they might have more practical experience and knowledge and are able to provide the correct judgement. They may help in taking the decisions that is not only beneficial for them but also got others in the long run. People should not get their ego problems and attitude in between when asking for help from others as the after effects can be sometime disastrous. To elucidate, in big organisations all the directors of the company have a meeting together and after the long discussions and putting forward their ideas and recommendations amicably, they take the decision for the organisation that helps in the overall profitable growth of the company.
In my opinion, I vehemently agree that individuals should refer to others proposals and advices before taking any vital and essential decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... ask for others opinion in that matter. The believe that they are more confident enough and...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... for others opinion in that matter. The believe that they are more confident enough and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14184397163 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76709378367 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471631205674 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6615851297 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159239884304 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783923284613 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252141141591 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109778277331 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252378153904 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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