The bar graph given helps us understand how the Australian children are spending their free time by giving insights into the activities taken up during it for girls and boys aged between 5-14 years.
The percentage of kids is shown against five activities namely, Skateboarding, bike riding, watching TV, playing video games, and art and craft.
Most of the boys and girls prefer watching tv or videos followed by electronics and computer games. Among the physical activities, bike riding, amounting over 70% in boys and about 60 % in girls takes precedence over skateboarding and rollerblading which barely touches 40 % in boys and just over 20% in girls.
As one looks over the choices regarding creative activities like art and craft, girls dominate boys with a difference of more than 20%. The trend, however, reverses as more than 80% of boys chose to spend time playing video games compared to about 60% of the opposite gender. One can also conclude that more boys are up for physical activity whereas their counterparts are more interested in being creative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10795454545 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936922335 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3374209771 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136148393289 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603305205278 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517438505226 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832319566668 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598141443994 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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