Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Becoming a better citizen of a country by imparting education is the fundamental role played by universities. Although some think it would be a negative development for male societies if they allow women to be part of every field, I, however, agree that it has a positive impact on the society as a whole if they treat girls and boys equally regardless of gender in two ways.
Firstly, uplifting the house is the major concern for the women, which should be offered through universities by obtaining higher educations. If the women are educated in the family, she can teach her children the difference between the right and wrong things. Due to this, a child would be able to distinguish what is good and bad for them and also be well-mannered. She could be the teacher or the mentor at certain times if her child is facing any problems during their studies at any time, teachers, however, are not available all the times. It is well said that if one woman is educated in the single family, the whole nation will be educated.
Eradicating discrimination is another area of concern which is a debatable issue in some countries. If girls and boys allowed to get education proportionately in each subject, which results discrimination being completely removed from the societies. Today in some areas both genders are treated equally as women have proven that they are better than men in the field of astronauts, namely Kalpana Chawla and Sunita Williams. They have shown to the world that the girls are ahead than the boys regardless of any field.
In conclusion, not only an equal number of both genders can sunshine the society as a whole, but it helps eliminate the discrimination among them. Therefore, I believe both men and women should be accepted by the universities equally in each area.
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Suggestion: getting
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Suggestion: equally; as; just as
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91233766234 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79404009648 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2282733231 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108388723112 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375010861455 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487624651853 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753869540427 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503039816685 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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