Many museum charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

No museums in the contemporary world are free due to their maintenance and effective functionality. While some depositories conduct exhibitions without any cost they are limited to a day or two for educational purposes. charging an admission fee for museums would benefit the building and organisations who hold these facilities which is an advantage can expand if necessary at the same time a free entrance into all museums would make exhibitors difficult to go through taking care of such precious things inside which incur some bills. this explains that advantages of charging an admission fee far outweighs the disadvantages of it.

To embark on, any place which has no limits or security will be ruined and damaged by visitors or users for sake of their self, no one bears accountability for preventing the place from damage or show some discipline towards what they are being using, this is because such culture is inhibited among citizens. But, if anything is chargeable and should pay fine if something is damaged by public would be taken utmost care to preserve their importance. achieving this is only possible by drawing some charge towards exhibiting precious ancient things in museums. For example, recently a art gallery was closed as they ran out of funds for maintaining it as it was completely free and artists did not received any remuneration for their hardwork and thought of depending only on funds which lead to its closure at the end.

Moreover, charging a minimum price for exclusive products in a museum would preserve its structure and emphasize the development in the future if required and if customers pay for the demanded price they also express some respect and responsibility towards what they are experiencing inside museums, so that, running a organisation is also easy and burden free. For instance, Salarjung museum received a award for world-class maintenance and keeping things intact as they were in the ancient periods without any damage which was achieved with basic fare impacted on tourists and customers.

In conclusion, in consideration with above mentioned factors and consequences, entrance or admission fees advantages could far outweigh the disadvantages of a cost-free museums

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24581005587 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95490593002 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0677350417 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.727272727 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315265751601 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12508989046 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760977903534 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210744367749 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752041033993 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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