Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has caused more problems than it has so.
What are your opinions on this?
Recently, the vast majority of women are working the same as men, they hold managerial positions in various sectors to follow their passions and achieve their aims. Although some people think there are some positive prospects of that trend, I support the view that this situation may cause several issues. In this essay, I will illustrate the negative effects of the certain stance.
First of all, wives should spend most of their time at home for chores as well as rise the children. This is because children need to be observed for long time and make sure they do their homework. For example, a recent study on a group of pupils has shown that students have their both parents working likelihood to fail with their studies, as a result not having appropriate surveillance. In other words it is hard for mothers to combine work, family, and give both the same care.
Secondly, the increasing rate of working women means low opportunities for men. In addition, husbands are the ones responsible for family's expenses. For instance, in Egypt it is nearly impossible for men to find a good plum at any institution or association. If women decide to work equal as men, many families will be out of money because men are going to be jobless.
In conclusion, women should only focus on their sons and daughters, and get away from all debilitating work that will lead to create good member in the future in the society. I strongly agree the drawbacks of working women outweigh benefits of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80620155039 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54313487725 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7075105054 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148441746104 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571107428533 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550538119458 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887248215112 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519779059969 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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